Showing posts with label Lex Wilson. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Lex Wilson. Show all posts

Saturday, November 21, 2015

Unmother, by Lex Wilson,

Analog Science Fiction and Fact, January/February 2015; ~5,000 words
Rating: 2, Not recommended  Recommended By:   SFRevu:4

A unit of an intelligent alien parasite in a human brain finds evidence that the host's immune system is on to them.

Mini-Review (click to view--possible spoilers)

Pro: It's quite a story that can make us root for a parasite. The unit doesn't seem to realize that it has become the new mother--or, if not the mother, it has at least become the leader.

Con: Since this is a hive organism, it's hard to believe a single unit could have so much intelligence. It's hard to believe the hive could survive the death of the queen. It's also hard to believe that destroying a single rogue unit (the "brother") plus a few neurons would make such a huge difference to the human host.

The science seems to be very wrong. The brain doesn't swim in a sea of glucose. Sodium and potassium don't form membranes, and they have nothing to do with proteins. Larvae is the plural of larva--it is not the singular.