Thursday, November 7, 2019

Keep the Line Tight But Not Too Tight, or Esteban and the Moon, by Joe M. McDermott

[Analog]
★☆☆☆☆

(SF Drama) A man struggles to bear up under the stress of building starships on the moon knowing that any mistake could kill thousands of helpless colonists. (6,414 words; Time: 21m)


"Keep the Line Tight But Not Too Tight, or Esteban and the Moon," by (edited by Trevor Quachri), appeared in issue 11-12|19, published on by .

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Review: 2019.610 (A Word for Authors)

Pro: It highlights the difficulty involved in trying to make starships that have to function perfectly for centuries.

Con: This story reads like a bad translation, with lots of bad/awkward English in it. The narration is intrusive and much of the dialogue is unnatural.

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