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(SF Space) Paddy's a good mechanic on a spaceship, but she worries when she starts seeing white lines that no one else can see. (5,415 words; Time: 18m)
Rating: ★☆☆☆☆ Needs Improvement
"Follow the White Line," by Bo Balder [bio], appeared in Clarkesworld issue 122, published on November 1, 2016.
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The entire story is told through narration, bar a bit of unnatural dialogue. Quite a few sentences are mangled nonsense.
The emotional AI that betrays the captain because of guilt is hard to buy.
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The emotional AI that betrays the captain because of guilt is hard to buy.
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