Wednesday, November 2, 2016

Follow the White Line, by Bo Balder

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(SF Space) Paddy's a good mechanic on a spaceship, but she worries when she starts seeing white lines that no one else can see. (5,415 words; Time: 18m)

Rating: ★☆☆☆☆ Needs Improvement

"," by , appeared in issue 122, published on .

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The entire story is told through narration, bar a bit of unnatural dialogue. Quite a few sentences are mangled nonsense.

The emotional AI that betrays the captain because of guilt is hard to buy.

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