★☆☆☆☆ Needs Improvement
(SF) Malcolm a navigator-commander for the Castakaran empire, is travelling on an ordinary troop carrier when it's attacked by the enemy. (17,000 words; Time: 56m)
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Review: 2015.206 (A Word for Authors)
Pro: The story seems to be set in a much larger, well-detailed universe.
Con: The writing is awful. It has POV shifts, unnatural dialogue, as-you-know-bob dialogue, editorializing narration, narration of emotions, and unnecessary info dumps.
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Pro: The story seems to be set in a much larger, well-detailed universe.
Con: The writing is awful. It has POV shifts, unnatural dialogue, as-you-know-bob dialogue, editorializing narration, narration of emotions, and unnecessary info dumps.
Other Reviews: Search Web, GoodReads.com
Jonathan Moeller Info: Interviews, Websites, ISFDB, FreeSFOnline
Follow RSR on Twitter, Facebook, RSS, or E-mail.
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