Saturday, March 12, 2016

Hyperspace Demons, by Jonathan Moeller

★☆☆☆☆ Needs Improvement

(SF) Malcolm a navigator-commander for the Castakaran empire, is travelling on an ordinary troop carrier when it's attacked by the enemy. (17,000 words; Time: 56m)

"Hyperspace Demons," by , published on by .

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Review: 2015.206 (A Word for Authors)

Pro: The story seems to be set in a much larger, well-detailed universe.

Con: The writing is awful. It has POV shifts, unnatural dialogue, as-you-know-bob dialogue, editorializing narration, narration of emotions, and unnecessary info dumps.

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