Saturday, March 12, 2016

Hyperspace Demons, by Jonathan Moeller

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(SF) Malcolm a navigator-commander for the Castakaran empire, is travelling on an ordinary troop carrier when it's attacked by the enemy. (~17,000 words)

Rating: 1, Needs Improvement
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"Hyperspace Demons," by was published by , .

Mini-Review (click to view--possible spoilers)

Pro: The story seems to be set in a much larger, well-detailed universe.

Con: The writing is awful. It has POV shifts, unnatural dialogue, as-you-know-bob dialogue, editorializing narration, narration of emotions, and unnecessary info dumps.

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