(SF AI) The town's new computer system is working awfully well. The public have never been happier with their city government. Something is too good to be true.
(2,142 words)
Rating: 1,
Needs Improvement
"Daedalus," by Niall Burke, appeared in Holdfast, issue 6, published June 28, 2015.
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Most of the story is told in narration. The dialogue is wooden. Reads more like the outline of a story than an actual story.
The idea that you could build entire buildings from the bodies of a few hundred homeless people is absurd. Likewise the idea that someone could design a computer virus for this purpose and expect it to work on the first try is silly.
The idea that you could build entire buildings from the bodies of a few hundred homeless people is absurd. Likewise the idea that someone could design a computer virus for this purpose and expect it to work on the first try is silly.
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