Saturday, November 21, 2015

Zapped, by Sherwood Smith, May 27, 2015; 14,296 words
Rating: 2, Not recommended  Recommended By: io9

Laurel is starting highschool in a new town, and although she's smart enough not to talk about her telekinetic ability, she can't resist using it sometimes.

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Pro: The different characters are very well developed. The different powers, the secret club, even the investigation all work very well. The narration and dialogue both seem clean and natural.

Con: There's no proper ending to the story. It just stops. It feels like the first couple of chapters of a novel.

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