Rating: 1, Improvement Needed
Adventure story about a catastrophe on a near-future floating city off the coast of Europe.
Mini-Review (click to view--possible spoilers)
Pro: Despite it's problems, this still manages to be exciting at points.
Con: The story is a good illustration of why "show vs. tell" is so important for writers to master. The narrator editorializes just about every emotional response, and the dialogue isn't very good either.
Con: The story is a good illustration of why "show vs. tell" is so important for writers to master. The narrator editorializes just about every emotional response, and the dialogue isn't very good either.
Not the best written story but it managed to keep me engaged. I’m always a sucker for apocalypse story lol
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