2,839 words
Rating: 1, Needs improvement
Expedition to another planet is trapped in a snow storm and a crewman starts seeing hallucinations.
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There are POV problems, show-v-tell problems, even grammar and spelling problems. A whole section about losing sight of the tents is apparently repeated by accident. But all of that aside, there just isn't a story here. We learn nothing about the crew as people, so we have no reason to care that some of them die.
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