tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1390876285955310032.post5061338102425916976..comments2024-03-26T14:48:15.857-07:00Comments on Rocket Stack Rank: Angel of the Blockade, by Alex WellsGreg Hullenderhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16720604327299886491noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1390876285955310032.post-54589965658854030572018-01-03T10:27:21.745-08:002018-01-03T10:27:21.745-08:00Excellent point. Done!Excellent point. Done!Greg Hullenderhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16720604327299886491noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1390876285955310032.post-17951221265137212502018-01-03T10:04:22.043-08:002018-01-03T10:04:22.043-08:00I really enjoyed how the author shows us instead o...I really enjoyed how the author shows us instead of telling us that Nata is blind. Then throughout the entire story we see how Nata "sees" everything with her other senses. In fact, I would suggest taking "Even though she's blind" out of your description because I liked the fact that it was something that clicked for me a little way in. Then I went back and re-read from the beginning with a new appreciation for the other sensory description.Laurahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16119082365881285289noreply@blogger.com